During this compressed time, Root and Hawks “came up with basically an original story,” the only similarities to Houston Branch’s outline being the “Little Portugal” setting in San Pedro and
the romantic triangle among the immigrant fisherman Miguel “Mike” Mascarenas, a woman, and a younger, better-looking man. What Branch had written was a vivid example of the sort of Depression era, proletariat-versus-exploitative-capitalist-owners story to which Warner Bros., far more than any other studio, was partial at that time. Inspired by a real dispute in the tuna industry at the time, the
tale centered on a “fish war” in California between the fish canneries, with their big fishing boats, and the traditional, independent Portuguese fishermen who struggled just to make a living. His own boat sunk, Mike accepts a job from a local big shot and helps him bring in a record catch, but he can only stand by as the Portuguese crew members are screwed out of much of the money they’ve earned.
The workers then decide to buy their own big boat, but must recruit an American citizen, Cardan, to purchase it. The wireless operator on the boat, the
San Christofero
, is a clean-cut fellow named Sparks, whom Mike subsequently saves from drowning. Still up against the cannery interests, Mike decides to become a U.S. citizen. When Mike correctly predicts that Cardan, too, will incite a disturbance
to justify cheating the poor fishermen out of their share, he locks Cardan in the freezer, but the workers are shortchanged anyway. Finally, when Mike becomes a citizen and the captain of his own boat, he throws a party and “buys” the permanent companionship of Bobbie, an L.A. taxi dancer.
Unfortunately, it doesn’t take long for Bobbie to fall for Sparks, whom the trusting Mike has made captain
of his supply boat, nor for Cardan to
inform Mike of his girl’s affair. Enraged, Mike gives Cardan a time bomb to place aboard the supply boat. In the meantime, however, Mike’s boat is split in two by a passenger liner in the fog and Mike is forced aboard the supply boat. Revealing what he’s done, Mike sets out full throttle for home and throws everything overboard, attracting a swarm of sharks.
After Mike himself ends up in the water and one shark is shot, the men all madly swim for shore, with Sparks helping Mike make it. Mike relinquishes his claim to Bobbie and, discredited among the other Portuguese, leaves town. The final scene finds him at the end of Santa Monica Pier, where he borrows a line to catch a fish. He sells it for a dime and buys a dance ticket, saying to a little blonde,
“Didn’t I tell you I’d be right back?”
Clearly, Hawks and Root had a lot of work to do if they were to make anything worthwhile out of all this. While his friend Bill Wellman might have been attracted to a hard-hitting attack on the ruthless cannery- and fishing-industry bosses, Hawks could never credit that sort of simplistic, ideological thinking; outside of the pro forma propaganda of his
World War II pictures, there are virtually no overt politics, polemics, or even politically aligned characters in any Hawks film, except in incidental cases where the object is satiric, as in
I Was a Male War Bride
, or when the characters are soldiers or Western lawmen. His films are positively brimming with a
philosophy
of living and behavior, but this is never placed in a context that could
be called political except in the most general of senses. Root said that not once during their several months together did Hawks ever mention politics. “I guess he just didn’t have any,” he surmised.
After a week during which Hawks and Root hammered out a new story line but put nothing down on paper, Zanuck would be denied no longer. “Hawks realized the spot I was in, and he was absolutely wonderful.
First off, Hawks gave Zanuck the title
Tiger Shark
, which was the first time I heard it. He then proceeded in that quiet, convincing style of his to tell Zanuck the story, managing to fill in the holes, and he made it sound absolutely wonderful. He finished by apologizing for not having it all down on paper, saying we didn’t think we could do the picture justice because some of the ideas we’d
just had in the last couple of days.”
Awestruck by Hawks’s performance, Root promised to have the first draft ready within four weeks, a necessity because of the heavily committed schedule of Edward G. Robinson, who was set to star as Mike. “We hired two secretaries and I dictated to one in the morning and one in the afternoon. I had never worked that way before and never did again,” recalled
Root. “Howard would come in and read every day, he worked right along
with it.” Root hung around San Pedro to pick up dialect, and Hawks later enlisted a Portuguese fishing captain for the duration of the shoot to guarantee the authenticity of the dialogue.
Root wasn’t the only one to notice a similarity in the story, as Hawks developed it, to Sidney Howard’s 1924 Pulitzer Prize–winning play,
They Knew What They Wanted
, about a homely middle-aged wine grower in Napa Valley whose mail order bride runs off with a younger, good-looking worker. Neither Root nor anyone else said anything about it, however, a tribute to Hawks’s stealthiness in his thievery. Years later, Hawks admitted that even while he was still in Hawaii, he “had figured on stealing
They Knew What They Wanted
.” He was smart
enough to know that “you don’t just take a scene and paraphrase the dialogue. I doubt if you could find a
scene
in
They Knew What They Wanted
that was like one in
Tiger Shark
. It’s only a basis.” Picking up on Hawks’s methods over the weeks, Root felt that a particular kind of brinksmanship represented a “strange key to his character. He was, in a sense, so heartless about risking this whole thing
for his vacation. We were right on the edge almost all the time. But he cared enough to see that we got it done when it mattered, so we didn’t really get in any trouble.”
One of the key decisions Hawks and Root made, one derived rather obviously from
Moby Dick
, was to have, in the opening scene, a shark bite off Mike’s hand, which is then replaced by a hook. “Giving him a hook on his arm was
a lot of help to the character,” Hawks maintained. “It removed him further from the girl, and it made him dangerous in an interesting way.” At first, Robinson challenged his director about the need for the device, but he quickly came around, as he did when Hawks suggested he wear an earring. Most crucial of all, however, was the advice Hawks gave Robinson on the first day of shooting. “We started
the picture with a dour man, thinking it’d have more drama and chance of violence when he found out about his wife’s unfaithfulness. We shot until about three in the afternoon the first day, and I stopped things and said to Robinson, ‘Eddie, this is going to be the dullest picture in the world. We have nothing to relieve it. All we’ve got is a dour, unpleasant man.’” Hawks told the actor about a man
he knew who talked quickly and constantly to cover up his shyness, and suggested Robinson make Mike a blustering, happy-go-lucky fellow whom “you felt kind of sorry for and who could also be pretty tough.” For Hawks, “the whole tenor of the picture changed” due to the alteration, much for the better, and it also made Mike something of a brother to Muni’s Scarface—brutal, insensitive, but also somewhat
innocent.
Robinson was initially wary of Hawks, who had all the Waspy qualities he frankly admitted made him feel insecure. “Howard seemed to be patrician, aristocratic, and I sensed he was looking down his nose at me,” the actor revealed. But he soon came around to like and admire the director, paying him high praise indeed when he said that, as a Broadway actor, he didn’t know anything about
the difference between stage and screen acting until he worked with Hawks. “He instinctively knew that a movie had to tell its story pictorially. Screenplays in those days, particularly a Hawks screenplay, were very sketchy and vague scenarios rather than screenplays as we know them today. But in the abstract, Hawks had a good basic story. Hawks would describe what he wanted and rely on my stage
experience to ad-lib and convey the feeling of a scene to the audience with more action than dialogue. Hawks’s development of a story was not unlike improvisation.” The latter was a term Hawks always scorned when it came into fashion years later. “They talk about ‘improvisation.’ That’s one of the silliest words that’s used in the motion picture industry. What the hell do they think a director
does
?” he asked sarcastically. “How do you expect that we can go out with a story that’s written up in a room, go out to the location, and do it verbatim? I have never found a writer who could imagine a thing so that you can do it like that.”
To film the extensive fishing sequences, Hawks once again enlisted Richard Rosson, who, with cameraman Byron Haskin and a sixteen-man crew, sailed between
Ensenada, Magdalena Bay, the Socorro Islands, and Mazatlán on Mexico’s Pacific Coast throughout most of April and May. Suffering just one minor casualty when a deckhand broke his ankle in an anchor line, this action unit filmed wonderfully evocative material, including the capture of sharks as well as nets full of tuna. They used a diving bell for some shots and were helped in other instances by
an old flying squadron friend of Hawks’s equipped with an airplane that was used to fly out to look for schools of tuna. In the early 1930s it was rare for any director, let alone one of Hawks’s stature, to entrust someone else to film key sequences for him, but Hawks thought so much of Rosson that he gave him such authority and was confident that the material “would come back just as though I’d
made it.” It was with work like this, which generated considerable comment upon the film’s release, that Dick Rosson almost single-handedly invented the job of second-unit director.
By early April, Hawks and Root had revamped the story line to something quite close to what appeared in the finished film. In the initial script,
which Zanuck liked for its story and atmosphere but criticized for
having too much melodrama and action and not enough detailing of Mike’s “strange character and strange psychology of life,” numerous motifs favored by Hawks suddenly appeared: mutilation (Mike receives a facial scar, à la Scarface, in the opening scene, before his hand is bitten off by a shark), a painful extraction (Mike must pull a fish hook out of his buddy’s neck, pre-figuring a similar scene
nearly twenty years later in
The Big Sky
), and a near suicide (Quita—formerly Bobbie—is about to kill herself over having been deserted by a married man when Mike arrives just in time). A song used to parallel Mike’s being cuckolded recalled the effective device from
Scarface
of Tony whistling the operatic tune just prior to committing a murder. Any mention of politics was now gone, and a final
tag scene was written to give the film some uplift at the end, but it ultimately was not used.
Root was hurriedly finishing the script, and trying out three different endings, when Hawks began shooting on April 28. Hawks was receiving his highest directing fee yet, $50,000, while star Edward G. Robinson drew $46,666. Feeling that a glamorous movie-star type would be all wrong for the troubled,
working-class girl Quita, Hawks remembered Zita Johann, a Hungarian-born actress whom he had seen onstage in New York and who had an odd, off-center, interestingly ethnic quality, and borrowed her from RKO, where she had just signed, for fifteen hundred dollars a week. Paramount loaned Richard Arlen at the same price to play Pipes, and Hawks brought back Vince Barnett for a little pre–Walter Brennan
comic relief. Zanuck had made Hawks’s whispery-voiced pal Raymond Griffith an associate producer at the studio as a payback for favors Griffith had done for him when Zanuck was struggling to find a toehold in the industry, and Hawks was glad to have him onboard as the production supervisor. The affable Bryan Foy, whom the director also liked, repeated as nominal producer for Zanuck, as he had
done on
The Crowd Roars
.
The first scenes shot were those between Robinson and Johann in Quita’s boardinghouse, and from the outset, it was clear Hawks’s pace was about half of what the studio expected. Zanuck respected Hawks immensely and tolerated the overages, but his measured manner of working infuriated nearly every other studio executive Hawks ever worked for, as did Hawks’s high-handed
disregard for matters of schedule and budget and his refusal to work if a producer or executive so much as set foot on a set. Hawks virtually institutionalized rewriting and trying new things on the set, saying, “You’re not trying to photograph a budget or a cost sheet. You’re trying to
make a scene that’s going to be good, the best you know how.” On the other hand, Niven Busch felt that “the
reason he was slow was he didn’t want to make any mistakes.”
Wells Root was on the set every day trying to fine-tune the dialogue, and his proudest impromptu contribution came when Hawks needed a better comeback line for Quita after Mike challenges her with, “So you think you’re better than I am?” “So far,” Root had her say, which Hawks heartily approved. Nevertheless, the director still felt
the dialogue overall left something to be desired and turned to his
Scarface
collaborator John Lee Mahin, who had since signed a two-hundred-dollar-a-week contract with MGM on the basis of recommendations from Hawks and Charles MacArthur. Mahin moonlighted on
Tiger Shark
, noting, “I’m sure Howard told Warner Brothers that he had rewritten it, you know. But that’s all right, I don’t mind, it’s
just one of Howard’s charms.” All the scenes were set, so Mahin, who found the existing dialogue “very pedestrian,” felt that his main job was to “lighten it up,” mostly for Robinson’s speeches.
Robinson no doubt believed that the modest dialogue changes he was getting were indeed coming from Hawks, while Root was unaware that Hawks had engaged another writer sub rosa to polish up his stuff.
“There were no hunks of dialogue coming in from left field while I was on set,” Root maintained. “And when I saw the finished picture, I would have noticed if there were any major changes.” Root found that Hawks “was a man who favored great economy of dialogue,” and he figured that the director was always looking for ways to whittle scenes to their essence, especially in a script that, at 125 pages,
was far too long for a film that shouldn’t run more than ninety minutes.