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Authors: Nicole Galland
What changed the most as you transformed the story into a novel?
What do you mean by “sexuality in general”?
What do you think changed least about the story in its new incarnation?
Your novel has a pretty modern voice. What’s the point of setting it in the Middle Ages if you’re not going to make it feel medieval?
So you don’t think Jean Renart is turning over in his grave?
Coming from Harper Paperbacks in February 2008, another thrilling novel from Nicole Galland that deftly blends historical fact with imaginative storytelling, wit, and sharp characterization.
Crossed
tells the story of the Fourth Crusade and the dramatic, disastrous sack of Constantinople in 1204.
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San Niccolo, that sweltering sand-bar of an island off the coast of Venice, rose a strange tent-city milling with ten thousand unwashed soldiers and their unwashed squires, whores, cooks, priests, horses, heralds, armorers, and smiths. They called themselves pilgrims, having taken the cross, having sworn to carry out the pope’s wishes. This meant they were going to an unknown desert, to wrest an unknown city from its unknown inhabitants.
Their transports and warships, waiting in the lagoon— heavy, strong, capacious, lethal— had been built by the Venetians, would be sailed by the Venetians, and at this moment were being stocked with food and water by the Venetians. In two days, the army and its fleet would finally—
finally
— set sail, after a season of political and financial delays, to do great good for Christendom.
But before they decamped, this would be the site of a gruesome murder-suicide, of such ferocity men would speak of it in fearful whispers, crossing themselves, for years to come.
At least, that was my plan.
As with so many things in this life, I was mistaken.
I leapt from Barzizza’s boat when the water was ankle-deep, trudging angrily through the oily green until I had splashed myself to dry land and the edge of the army camp. Venice was mostly paving stone and water; this was the first time in a month I’d been on living soil. Earth felt comforting under my bare wet feet, but I didn’t want comfort— I wanted death, and was panicked at the thought of being cheated of it. I’d learned half a dozen languages, taught myself to play music I did not like and eaten food I could barely stomach, grown my beard and my hair and woken up every day forcing myself to go on, for three years, to prepare for my exquisite, redemptive death— a death I now feared I’d been robbed of.
I had no weapon, just a spit of iron small enough to fold my hand around: a spike with a hook on one end, stolen from Barzizza’s house, some sort of fishing spear. I don’t remember how I learned which pavilion was the high commander’s nor what trick I used to distract the guards at the door, but the trick was fast accomplished; I was still seething as I scrambled inside, I could still hear my heartbeat pulsing in my temples as my eyes adjusted to the darkness.
There were only two men in this cool, open space: the army commander himself, and a large young knight kneeling to his right, presumably his bodyguard. Both wore tunics decorated with broad gold braids. They were whispering together. Neither was the man I wanted.
“
Where are the English
?” I shouted.
They started, stared at me; the knight lumbered to his feet grabbing for the dagger in his belt, as the leader responded, in a droll voice, “They are in England, I imagine.”
So it was true, what Barzizza had told me; this final trek had been for nothing. A howl of humiliated rage escaped me. Across my mind flashed the journey back to Britain. I would never survive that. My one chance for revenge had been illusory; my intended victim had never even been in reach. With the warped logic of despair and rage, I decided then that I would still forfeit the one life that was yet mine to take: my own.
Both of the men staring at me now were armed. This would be simple, then: I had only to hurl myself upon the leader, and the bodyguard would kill me instantly.
When you know this one is your final heartbeat, time slows for a final savoring of the senses. In less than a blink I noticed more about my surroundings than I had in years: the feel of the woven-grass mats under my feet, the elaborate, bright decorations on the tent walls, the smell of rosewater and woolly must that pervaded the pavilion, the commander’s aristocratic handsomeness, the likeable face of the young man who was about to skewer me. He had both sword and dagger in his belt; I wondered which he would use.
I also noticed, in that flicker, that I was interrupting something significant. Although the knight had been kneeling, there was an informality between them, as if they were kin. The lord looked oddly
relieved
by my interruption— until I raised the spike above my head and threw myself at him.
The young man was quick for one so large, but he was nowhere near as quick as I was, and I realized that I could accidentally kill the lord. The lord cringed, but he did not move to protect himself, trusting his knight. I myself did not trust his knight, and as my hands descended, I shirked, pulled back a hair, so that the hooked point of the spike just missed the lord’s skull and only my knuckles glanced off his bald brow; by then the knight had me, huge left paw grabbing me around the throat, huge right one shoving the dagger-point against my liver. So this was it: I was over now, finally and despite everything. Suddenly I was flooded with euphoria and involuntarily, I grinned at him— my executioner, my liberator. His hair and beard gave his face a golden glow. I literally loved him more than my own life.
Our eyes locked; all my weight rested in his clenched left fist around my throat, the knife at my gut, as I waited for him to plunge it in.
He didn’t.
He yanked the blade away and shoved me hard to the matted ground, where I choked on a mouthful of straw.
Something had gone horribly wrong: I wasn’t dead.
The knight said something in a garbled language to the lord, who answered similarly. There was a brief debate, which to this day I cannot remember understanding. Listening in stunned outrage, I gradually recognized it as a Lombard dialect I was familiar with; at that point they could have been speaking in my native tongue and it would have sounded like so much nonsense. I was removed from my own skin, too dazed to understand what was happening.
By the time I registered that I was not only not dead, but— a far worse affair— completely
alive
, the young man had returned his attention to me. “You’re not a murderer,” he declared. “You’re a suicide. Suicide is a sin and by St. John, I will not assist you in it.”
I gawked. “I just tried to kill your master!” I protested. “Look, you stupid ass, I’ll do it again!” I scrambled to my feet, light-headed, fighting back the urge to scream and laugh hysterically at once, and unsteadily I raised the spike. This time I wouldn’t hesitate, I’d show the whoreson I meant business. He’d have no choice but to cut me down.
But everything seemed to slow. He grabbed me again, both of those meaty mitts reaching for my right hand, and again he heaved me down effortlessly. By the time I hit the floor of the tent,
he
held my spike. He tossed it away out of my reach. “You pulled back,” he announced. “We both saw it. You made sure not to hurt his lordship the marquis. You are goading me to kill you and I won’t do it. Nor will anybody else.”
He called out, “Richard,” and a sweet-faced boy with a colorless wisp of facial down trotted into the tent. The knight gave him an order and Richard moved toward me, matter-of-factly began to tie my hands in front of me.
“What are you
doing
?” I shouted, horrified.
“You are now my captive,” the knight informed me— as if I should consider myself lucky. “No more of this nonsense.” Inexplicably, although I no longer liked him, he still seemed to have a warm, earnest
glow
to him, as if this were his normal state.
“I’m a
criminal
,” I protested. “
Execute
me, idiot, do the world a favor.”
He grimaced disapprovingly and shook his head. And then, as if he were my loving older brother trying to teach me a lesson, he said, “From what I’ve seen, you are a sinner, not a criminal, and the burden of a sinner is to repent.”
This could not really be happening. “You want me to
repent
?” I repeated weakly.
He nodded. The elegant marquis, watching us, looked almost amused now. “You will repent the impulse toward self-murder,” announced the knight. “And whatever blackness is in your soul that drove you to such despair in the first place, you must also repent of that.”
“And
then
you’ll execute me?” I insisted, desperate.
The marquis laughed. The knight did not. The knight seemed to have nothing resembling a sense of humor at all. He was, it now seemed obvious, German.
Ordinarily I would not have sat there passively, letting some boy-child tie me in knots insufficient to keep a tree from running off. But I’d just tossed myself into the arms of Death…and Death had tossed me back. I was in a state of shock. So when the boy pulled me to standing, I stood. Then, almost as an afterthought, I struggled against his grip. Only because I dimly remembered that I probably should.
“Bind his wrists, but don’t hurt his hands,” the knight said to the boy. “Look at those hands. I think he’s a musician.”
I stopped struggling, startled. I followed the boy out of the tent, blinking stupidly in the brilliant haze of the Venetian afternoon.
Award-winning screenwriter NICOLE GALLAND is working on her fourth novel, set in Leominster, England. An itinerant gypsy for much of her adult life, she has recently married, and rumor has it she will even settle down soon.
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“A clever novel of courtly love…entertains with a flourish.”
“Galland has an exceptional gift for characters and relationships.”
“A tasty fictional stew, mixing elements of twelfth-century culture together skillfully to produce a veritable reading feast…. The combination of vicious politics, mysterious doings, betrayals, and double-dealing, added to a leisurely but engaging plot, will keep those pages turning.”
“A wallop of a first novel— entertaining and engaging.”
“An ambitious and eminently theatrical story of power, passion, and illicit love…. Galland keeps the reader guessing about the outcome until the very last page.”
“Set in an age when marriage was strategy, love was temptation, and treachery was a tool of survival, Nicole Galland’s
The Fool’s Tale
creates a vivid twelfth-century world and three unforgettable characters whose lives entwine with war and politics and climax in an ending as haunting as it is powerful.”
“The characters and descriptions in Galland’s world certainly are worth stopping by to meet as the story gallops through a time of treachery, rife with infighting among the four kingdoms of Wales and border clashes with the English barons…. As we share life from the perspective of each of the three main characters, understanding takes its turn amid powerful emotional tides, awash in realities of today.”