Authors: Presentation Secrets
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designing the slides was easy. Remember, it’s the story,
not the
slides
, that will capture the imagination of your audience.
The Napkin Test
A picture is the most powerful method for conveying an idea.
Instead of booting up your computer, take out a napkin. Some
of the most successful business ideas have been sketched on
the back of a napkin. One could argue that the napkin has been
more important to the world of business ideas than PowerPoint.
I used to think that “napkin stories” were just that—stories,
from the imagination of journalists. That is until I met Richard
Tait, the founder of Cranium. I prepared him for an interview
on CNBC. He told me that during a cross-country flight from
New York to Seattle, he took out a small cocktail napkin and
sketched the idea of a board game in which everyone had a
chance to excel in at least one category, a game that would give
everyone a chance to shine. Cranium became a worldwide sen-
sation and was later purchased by Hasbro. The original concept
was simple enough to write on a tiny airline napkin.
One of the most famous corporate napkin stories involves
Southwest Airlines. A lawyer at the time, Herb Kelleher met
with one of his clients, Rollin King, at the St. Anthony’s Club, in
San Antonio. King owned a small charter airline. He wanted to
start a low-cost commuter airline that avoided the major hubs
and instead served Dallas, Houston, and San Antonio. King
sketched three circles, wrote the names of the cities inside,
and connected the three—a strikingly simple vision. Kelleher
understood immediately. Kelleher signed on as legal counsel
(he later became CEO), and the two men founded Southwest
Airlines in 1967. King and Kelleher would go on to reinvent
airline travel in the United States and build a corporate culture
that would earn Southwest’s place among the most admired
companies in the world. Never underestimate the power of a
vision so simple that it can fit on a napkin!
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The Story Takes Center Stage
In
Beyond Bullet Points
, Cliff Atkinson stresses, “The single most important thing you can do to dramatically improve your presentations is to have a story to tell
before
you work on your
PowerPoint file.
”3
Atkinson advocates a three-step storyboard approach to creating presentations:
Writing → Sketching → Producing
Only after writing—scripting—the scenes does he advocate
thinking visually about how the slides will look. “To write a
script, you need to momentarily set aside PowerPoint design
issues like fonts, colors, backgrounds, and slide transitions.
Although it might sound counterintuitive, when you write a
script first, you actually expand your visual possibilities, because
writing defines your purpose before you start designing. A script
unlocks the undiscovered power of PowerPoint as a visual story-
telling tool in ways that might surprise and delight you and your
audiences.
”4 Wi
th a completed script in hand, you’ll be ready to sketch and “produce” the experience. The script, however, must
come first.
Nine Elements of Great Presentations
Persuasive presentation scripts contain nine common ele-
ments. Think about incorporating each of these components
before you open the presentation program, whether you work
in PowerPoint, Keynote, or any other design software. Some of
these concepts will be explored in more detail later, but for now
keep them in mind as you develop your ideas.
HEADLINE
What is the one big idea you want to leave with your audi-
ence? It should be short (140 characters or less), memorable, and
written in the subject-verb-object sequence. When Steve Jobs
unveiled the iPhone, he exclaimed, “Today Apple reinvents the
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phone!”5
That’s a headline. Headlines grab the attention of your audience and give people a reason to listen. Read
USA Today
for ideas. Here are some examples from America’s most popular
daily newspaper:
”Apple’s Skinny MacBook Is Fat with Features”
”Apple Unleashes Leopard Operating System”
”Apple Shrinks iPod”
PASSION STATEMENT
Aristotle, the father of public speaking, believed that success-
ful speakers must have “pathos,” or passion for their subject.
Very few communicators express a sense of excitement about
their topic. Steve Jobs exudes an almost giddy enthusiasm every
time he presents. Former employees and even some journal-
ists have claimed that they found his energy and enthusiasm
completely mesmerizing. Spend a few minutes developing a pas-
sion statement by filling in the following sentence: “I’m excited
about this product [company, initiative, feature, etc.] because
it .” Once you have identified the passion
statement, don’t be bashful—share it.
THREE KEY MESSAGES
Now that you have decided on your headline and passion state-
ment, write out the three messages you want your audience to
receive. They should be easily recalled without the necessity of
looking at notes. Although Scene 5 is dedicated to this subject,
for now keep in mind that your listeners can recall only three or
four points in short-term memory. Each of the key messages will
be followed by supporting points.
METAPHORS AND ANALOGIES
As you develop key messages and supporting points, decide on
which rhetorical devices will make your narrative more engag-
ing. According to Aristotle, metaphor is “the most important
thing by far.” A metaphor—a word or phrase that denotes one
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thing and is used to designate another for purposes of compar-
ison—is a persuasive tool in the best marketing, advertising,
and public relations campaigns. Jobs uses metaphors in conver-
sations and presentations. In one famous interview, Jobs said,
“What a computer is to me is the most remarkable tool that we
have ever come up with. It’s the equivalent of a bicycle for our
minds.
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Sales professionals are fond of sports metaphors: “We’re all
playing for the same team”; “This isn’t a scrimmage; it’s for real”;
or “We’re batting a thousand; let’s keep it up.” While sports
metaphors work fine, challenge yourself to break away from
what your audience expects. I came across an interesting meta-
phor for a new antivirus suite of applications from Kaspersky.
The company ran full-page ads (the one I saw was in
USA Today
)
that showed a dejected medieval soldier in a full suit of armor
walking away, with his back toward the reader. The headline
read, “Don’t be so sad. You were very good once upon a time.”
The metaphor compared today’s Internet security technologies
(Kaspersky’s competitors) to slow, cumbersome medieval armor,
which of course is no match for today’s military technology. The
company extended the metaphor to the website with an image
of a suit of armor and the same tagline. The metaphor was con-
sistent throughout the company’s marketing material.
Analogies are close cousins of metaphors and also are very
effective. An analogy is a comparison between two different
things in order to highlight some area of similarity. Analogies
help us understand concepts that might be foreign to us. “The
microprocessor is the brain of your computer” is an analogy that
works well for companies such as Intel. In many ways, the chip
serves the same function in the computer as a brain serves in a
human. The chip and the brain are two different things with
like features. This particular analogy is so useful that it is widely
picked up by the media. When you find a strong analogy that
works, stick with it and make it consistent across your presenta-
tions, website, and marketing material. Jobs likes to have fun
with analogies, especially if they can be applied to Microsoft.
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Jobs pointed out that many people say iTunes is their favorite
application for Windows. “It’s like giving a glass of ice water to
someone in hell!
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DEMONSTRATIONS
Jobs shares the spotlight with employees, partners, and prod-
ucts. Demos make up a large part of his presentations. When
Jobs unveiled a new version of the OS X operating system, code-
named Leopard, at Apple’s Worldwide Developers Conference
(commonly abbreviated WWDC, the annual conference is an
Apple event to showcase new software and technologies) in
June 2007, he said Leopard had three hundred new features. He
chose ten to discuss and demonstrate, including Time Machine
(automated backup), Boot Camp (runs Windows XP and Vista
on Mac), and Stacks (file organization). Instead of simply list-
ing the features on a slide and explaining them, he sat down
and showed the audience how they worked. He also chose the
features
he
wanted the press to highlight. Why leave it to the media to decide which of three hundred new features were the
most compelling? He would tell them.
Does your product lend itself to a demonstration? If so, script
it into the presentation. Your audience wants to see, touch, and
experience your product or service. Bring it to life.
I worked with Goldman Sachs investors to prepare the CEO
of a Silicon Valley semiconductor start-up that was about to go
public. The company shrinks chips that create audio sound for
mobile computers. As we were planning the investor presenta-
tion, the CEO pulled out a chip the size of a fingernail and said,
“You wouldn’t believe the sound that this generates. Listen to
this.” He turned up the volume on his laptop and played music
that impressed those of us who were in the room. It was a no-
brainer to use the same demonstration (with a more dramatic
buildup) when the executive pitched the company to investors.
The IPO went on to become a huge success. An investor who
had underwritten the company later called me and said, “I don’t
know what you did, but the CEO was a hit.” I didn’t have the
heart to say that I stole the idea from the Steve Jobs playbook.
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PARTNERS
Jobs shares the stage with key partners as well as his products. In
September 2005, Jobs announced that all of Madonna’s albums
would be available on iTunes. The pop star herself suddenly
appeared via webcam and joked with Jobs that she had tried to
hold out as long as possible but got tired of not being able to
download her own songs. Whether it’s an artist or an industry
partner like the CEOs of Intel, Fox, or Sony, Jobs often shares
the stage with people who contribute to Apple’s success.
CUSTOMER EVIDENCE AND THIRD-PARTY ENDORSEMENTS
Offering “customer evidence” or testimonials is an important
part of the selling cycle. Few customers want to be pioneers,
especially when budgets are tight. Just as recruiters ask for ref-
erences, your customers want to hear success stories. This is
especially critical for small companies. Your sales and marketing
collateral might look great in that glossy four-color brochure, but
it will be met with a healthy degree of skepticism. The number
one influencer is word of mouth. Successful product launches
usually have several customers who were involved in the beta
and who can vouch for the product. Incorporate customer evi-
dence into your pitch. Including a quote is simple enough, but
try going one step further by recording a short testimonial and
embedding the video on your site and in your presentation.
Even better, invite a customer to join you in person (or via web-
cam) at a presentation or an important sales meeting.
Do you have third-party reviews of your product? Always use
third-party endorsements when available. Word of mouth is one
of the most effective marketing tools available, and when your