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Authors: Christopher Sirmons Haviland

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But Edmund is unwilling to wait for his father to die. He has lavish gambling debts and a taste for expensive things. And so, with criminal help, he sets out to hasten the process of dismantling his father’s estate, selling off property, cheating his brother, hiding it from his father.

Late one rainy evening Josh awakens from a peculiar dream to find that he is sitting on his porch swing, although he can’t remember going outdoors. From inside the house his dog is growling, and he realizes that he has been speaking out loud, answering someone in his dream—a young girl, uncannily familiar. It comes to him abruptly that her parting words in the dream were identical to the last words spoken by Elinor Hawthorn, right at the moment that he was forced to release her to drown, and he realizes that in the moment of his awakening, he had been absolutely certain it was Elinor, that this hadn’t been a dream at all, not in any real sense.

Hearing what sounds like footfalls on the sidewalk and the whisper of a ghostly voice, he steps off the porch and into the rain. The lamplit streets are empty of people, and the night is silent except for sound of the wind.

When Anne Hawthorn walks into the Earl of Gloucester, and Josh sees her with no recollection of ever having seen her before, he’s nevertheless shocked—shaken. He realizes that he has somehow associated this woman with the girl in his dream. He tells himself that he must have seen her before, no doubt when she had applied for the job as a sets artist.

The two are attracted to each other almost immediately, neither of them suspecting that they knew each other, briefly and traumatically, fifteen years ago.

The Earl of Gloucester occupies half a city block, a valuable piece of downtown Huntington Beach real estate owned outright by Earl Dalton. The vast old clapboard warehouse is a warren of rooms and catwalks and lofts and dusty skylights, and is filled with vintage automobiles, wooden galleons, stagecoaches, underwater seascapes, and an unimaginable litter of theater props. It’s connected to another old building that houses a community theater company dating back to the 1920’s, still hung with heavy velvet curtains and ancient chandeliers—very atmospheric, but a nightmare to maintain. Like most theater companies, it regularly loses money. The theater director, Charles Collier, is Earl’s longtime friend, and the company uses the theater rent-free. Edmund despises his father’s generosity and his indifference to business, his love of junk theater and his junk friends. The theater and the land it sits on are worth a small fortune.

Josh stumbles across proof that Edmund is defrauding his father and brother, selling his father’s real estate on Catalina Island by filing fraudulent quit claim deeds. When Josh reveals this to Casey, Casey doesn’t care. He’s indifferent to his father’s wealth; greed, he says, is his brother’s disease. Casey understands that his father is living in his own sort of theatrical Wonderland. Given his health, what value is there in wrecking it? How could he possibly be better off knowing that Edmund would betray him?

Josh and Anne sail across the twenty-five mile channel to the island where they discover that Edmund has very powerful associates, including Paul Lavenberg, an accountant, who genially (and convincingly) warns Josh to mind his own business.

Anne, finally, takes Casey’s side. Let it go, she tells Josh, for the old man’s sake. Justice can wait. She reveals that Edmund has made several passes at her over the past couple of weeks. She would certainly like to help give Edmund the trouble he deserves. But she can’t, and neither can Josh without it becoming trouble for all of them. Josh isn’t happy with the idea of letting justice wait. His failing to save Elinor all those years ago has given him a heightened sense of duty—or, perhaps if he were more honest, a fear of personal failure.…

In a passionate late-night conversation on the island, Josh finally discovers that Anne is the girl he saved fifteen years ago, and realizes too that he loves her. Anne, it turns out, has known both of these things for some time. For her part, Anne reveals her fears about her dead sister, and suddenly Josh’s front-porch dream becomes a shade more ominous.

For Josh and Anne, falling in love will turn out to be wonderfully easy, but remaining in love will be slightly more complicated. Anne has dreams of marriage and a family, and when she expresses them, Josh is evasive. Although he cannot—or will not—admit it, the responsibility of that sort of life-long bond frightens him. He failed to save a child fifteen years ago; what if he failed his own children, or failed Anne? From Josh’s point of view, we’re living in a world in which children drown, and sometimes there’s nothing we can do to protect them. It’s safer not to get too close. Anne’s patience with him is partly because of her love for him, and partly because she realizes that his fears are not so very different from her own.

Upon returning to the mainland, Josh confronts Edmund, warning him about Anne and about his illicit business affairs. Edmund laughs at the warning. Shortly thereafter, Josh and Anne return to Anne’s studio and find it a wreck, several of her paintings destroyed with a nearly infantile aggression. Josh suspects Edmund; Anne sees in it evidence of her dead sister.

Edmund’s further attempts to attract Anne are futile, and he hates Josh all the more because of it. Beneath his veneer of superiority and tired indifference, Edmund is increasingly frustrated—with his debts, with his desires, and with his failure to manipulate people, especially Anne. In late night reveries he imagines himself alone with Anne, and finally, out of the empty darkness, Elinor’s identical-twin ghost materializes for him, somehow summoned by his dark passion. As the nights pass she appears more easily and frequently, and comes to possess him with the urgency of her own passions and jealousies, until finally he begins to imagine that with Anne dead, Elinor—quite literally a woman of his dreams—will be restored to actual life.

Lavenberg, Edmund’s criminal accountant, grows increasingly fearful that Josh will cause trouble for Edmund and him both. But as Edmund grows daily more unstable, Lavenberg comes to fear his partner more than he fears Josh, and he’s compelled finally to threaten Edmund by revealing the extent of his own power. Lavenberg, after all, has kept the books and made the transactions which, skillfully manipulated, will make Edmund appear to be starkly guilty. Edmund, he suggests, had better be satisfied with things as they are.

But Edmund is far from satisfied with things as they are, and Lavenberg’s threats have the unfortunate effect of redoubling both his panic and his desires. His father’s health grows worse by the day, it seems, and if the old man were to die, half of the existing estate would fall to Casey. Lavenberg’s betraying him makes this outcome seem almost certain. The pressure from Lavenberg, the tightening noose of Edmund’s debts, and the strangely possessive effects of the phantasmal Elinor all combine to propel Edmund into increasing desperation.

A fire breaks out at the old theater, evidently started by Charles Collier’s granddaughter, who blames it on her imaginary friend … a friend named Elinor.

Someone seems to be visiting—or haunting—Anne’s studio and apartment, despite locked doors and windows. More than once she has seen Edmund lurking in the area, the shadow of a man in the alley below the rear window, heavy footsteps in the outer hallway late at night, and she fears that she is being stalked. Josh encourages her to report her suspicions to the police, but there’s nothing solid to implicate Edmund, whose wealth and position in the community make him immune to idle accusations. This immunity makes him all the more bold.

There are also signs—signs that only Anne can recognize—that the intruder is not Edmund at all, but is Elinor.

And Anne’s paintings have, over the weeks, come to resemble the young Elinor’s. Josh sees in them a growing morbidity and darkness that Anne doesn’t seem to see, and then is anxious to deny. She spends hours on the beach where her sister drowned, painting stormy seascapes under clouded winter skies, as if she is trying to get something just right, to recapture some lost thing from the shadowy green depths of the ocean.

Casey is found dead—drowned in what appears to be a surfing accident on a foggy morning at dawn. He had gone out surfing alone. Josh suspects he didn’t simply drown, and, wishing now that he had exposed Edmund weeks ago, he sets out to find proof that Casey was murdered. Very shortly, someone tries to kill him, too, while he’s working alone in the Earl of Gloucester. He’s certain it’s Edmund, but in the shadowy warehouse, with its myriad corridors and its connections to the old theater and with a thousand places for a person to hide, he can’t be sure.

When Lavenberg learns of Casey’s death, he abandons Edmund entirely. He’s had enough of Edmund’s schemes, money or no money, and he threatens to expose him.

Edmund murders Lavenberg. Murder, he has discovered, is a simple, alternate solution to problems that have gotten hopelessly tangled, like a sudden clean breath of air in a stuffy room.

Old Collier discovers Edmund lighting a fire at the side of the theater, clearly attempting to make it look like the work of a child—Collier’s granddaughter. Edmund provokes Collier into assaulting him. He has set everything up cleverly, and the blame falls to the granddaughter again. Edmund tries to compel his father to throw Collier off the property, which would mean the end of the theater and, ultimately, the collapse of the careful theatrical shelter his father has constructed around himself in the last years of his life. Half-wrecked by Casey’s recent death, Earl nearly capitulates, but when Josh and Anne offer to look after Collier’s granddaughter (whom they understand to be innocent anyway) he finds the strength to refuse Edmund. So Edmund’s last active money-making scheme is smashed, and he is left despised, defeated, and desperately enmeshed in what has become an increasingly psychotic, love/hate relationship with Anne/Elinor.

Anne suspects that she’s being followed by someone when she exits a Laguna Beach gallery late one night. She’s attacked near her disabled car, but manages to fight off her pursuer and finally eludes him after a suspenseful chase through a brush-covered canyon and down onto a deserted ocean cove. In the moonlight she identifies Edmund.

Josh finally discovers hard evidence that Edmund murdered Casey, and Edmund, clearly guilty at last, is forced to flee.

All of Edmund’s schemes are collapsed. What he has left is the ghost of Elinor, his nearly uncontrollable obsession with Anne, and his hatred of Josh and the people who he believes have destroyed him. He dreams of burning the old theater to the ground. Killing the people associated with it would be the only profit left in the act, but that would be profit enough. At night he is drawn back to Anne’s apartment, increasingly desperate and reckless.

In the final scenes of the book, Josh, knowing that Edmund will be compelled to act on his obsessions, devises a scheme to lure Edmund into the Earl of Gloucester. The scheme seems to fail; Edmund doesn’t appear … until later that night, when, as Collier’s show opens in the old theater, Anne stumbles upon Edmund, alone in the deserted props warehouse.

Josh, doubtful about Anne’s absence from the theater, goes looking for her, just as a spectacular fire breaks out, a fire which quickly engulfs the old curtains, burning up into the roof, igniting the props and the wooden stage. Josh finds Anne in the Earl of Gloucester and finally has his chance to confront Edmund, who by now is completely demented and puts up a wild and terrible struggle before falling to his death from a catwalk high above the warehouse floor.

Collier’s granddaughter is missing, and the fire is still burning in the theater. Anne and Josh plunge into the smoke and are quickly separated as they desperately search backstage. Josh finds a little girl in one of the costuming rooms, unconscious on the floor. He picks her up, only then discovering that the girl he holds in his arms is not Collier’s granddaughter at all, but is the twelve year old Elinor. Despite the terrible risk of saving a child whom he knows to be a ghost, he saves her anyway, and when he finally lurches to safety in the firelit parking lot, Elinor vanishes, and only Anne (who has found Collier’s granddaughter and gotten her out safely) sees who it is that Josh has saved.

In the end, it is the very senselessness of having saved the life of a ghost that reveals to Josh the parallel senselessness of his having blamed himself for Elinor’s death all these years. His doubts about himself have vanished along with Elinor’s ghost. And so, with the death of Edmund and the act of saving Elinor, the ghosts of the past, which have haunted the lives of Anne and Josh for fifteen years, are finally exorcised.

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Brian Herbert and Kevin J. Anderson

Brian Herbert is the author of
Ocean
(with wife Jan Herbert),
The Little Green Book of Chairman Rahma
,
Sudanna, Sudanna
,
The Race for God,
Sidney’s Comet
, and, with his father Frank Herbert, the hilarious science fiction spoof,
Man of Two Worlds
. In collaboration with Kevin J. Anderson, he has written numerous best-selling novels set in the Dune universe as well as their original Hellhole trilogy.

Kevin J. Anderson has published over 125 books, more than fifty of which have been national or international best sellers. He has written numerous novels in the Star Wars, X-Files, and Dune universes, as well as a unique steampunk fantasy novel,
Clockwork Angels
, based on the concept album by legendary rock group Rush. His original works include the Saga of Seven Suns series, the Terra Incognita fantasy trilogy, the Saga of Shadows trilogy, and his humorous horror series featuring Dan Shamble, Zombie PI. He has edited numerous anthologies, including the Five by Five and Blood Lite series. He and his wife Rebecca Moesta are the publishers of WordFire Press.

One might think that a proposal to write a new Dune novel, authorized by the Frank Herbert estate, would be a slam-dunk.
Dune
is the best-selling SF novel of all time, so we certainly should have been able to find a publisher. However, our agent advised us that we had to write a proposal with sufficient detail to convince a prospective editor that we intended to tell a story of sufficient scope and complexity to merit the label of Dune. We had to dispel any skepticism among the publishing world.

So, we did a lot of work up front. The resulting proposal turned out to be huge (one editor jokingly told us that it is the longest proposal that was ever actually read in the history of New York publishing). We felt, however, that we had to do the work anyway, developing the plotlines and characters. We needed this intricate and detailed outline for the two of us to write the book. It was our roadmap for writing the novel, and we tailored it to a sales pitch and proposal for publishers to see.

—Kevin J. Anderson

NOTE: The following pitch makes reference to a proposal that I am not including in this volume due to length. —CSH

Prelude to
Dune
A Trilogy of the Events Leading up to the Grand Epic of Frank Herbert’s Classic
Dune

Brian Herbert and Kevin J. Anderson

Frank Herbert’s
Dune
is the best-selling science fiction novel of all time, with nearly ten million copies in print. A seminal classic in the field,
Dune
was the first winner of the prestigious Nebula Award, given in 1965 by the Science Fiction Writers of America;
Dune
also received SF’s other great award, the Hugo, presented by the fans and readers for the best novel of the year. Thus,
Dune
has received the genre’s equivalent of both the “Academy Award” and the “People’s Choice Award.”

But
Dune
’s popularity didn’t stop with the first novel: its five sequels, written between 1969 and 1985, were also huge successes. As
Dune
’s popularity grew, the third novel in the series,
Children of Dune
(1976), became the very first science fiction novel ever to appear on the
New York Times
best seller list; each of the three subsequent
Dune
novels—
God Emperor of Dune
,
Heretics of Dune
, and
Chapterhouse: Dune
—were also
New York Times
best sellers, making the entire
Dune
saga the best-selling original SF series in publishing history, with over 15 million copies in print worldwide.

The original novel has never been out of print since its first publication in 1965, and continues to sell strongly worldwide even thirty years later.
Dune
has been published in French, English (US and United Kingdom), German, Spanish, Portugese, Dutch, Japanese, Italian, Polish, Bulgarian, Romanian, Hungarian, Hebrew, Czech, Danish, Finnish, Swedish, Turkish, Serbo-Croat, and Russian.

A new six-hour miniseries production of
Dune
is currently in development as a cooperative effort between ABC and the Sci-Fi Channel. The 1984 Universal motion picture adaptation of
Dune
became one of the highest grossing science fiction films of the year, breaking box-office records overseas; when released on videocassette,
Dune
also became a top-seller.

Time and again, science fiction fans have chosen
Dune
as their most loved novel in the genre. Truly, this is science fiction’s equivalent of
The Lord of the Rings
or
Gone with the Wind.

The grand saga of
Dune
is set in a vast galactic empire, ruled by the conniving Emperor Shaddam IV. The most precious substance is the spice melange (“spice”), which can extend life, expand the mind, and also allow specially trained and mutated humans, Guild Navigators, to fold space and carry giant starships across interstellar distances. Without spice, travel between the stars would not be possible, and the galactic empire would collapse. Powerful families fight for control of spice stockpiles and trade.

Spice is found on only one planet in the known universe, the harsh desert world of Arrakis, called “Dune” by its nomadic inhabitants. Dune is a place of terrific sandstorms, giant worms that devour entire spice factories, and sprawling deserts where water is more precious than gold. The Imperial-appointed planetologist Liet-Kynes has spent his life trying to understand the ecology of Dune, while he secretly leads an underground resistance movement against the oppressive overseers, the evil Harkonnen family.

For decades the spice trade has been monopolized (in the Emperor’s name) by the corrupt and vicious Baron Vladimir Harkonnen, but as
Dune
opens, the Emperor withdraws Harkonnen control, supposedly on a whim. The heroic Duke Leto Atreides, head of House Atreides and mortal enemy of House Harkonnen, is unexpectedly granted control of all spice harvesting operations. The Atreides family must leave their lush water world of Caladan to take up residence in an austere fortress on the desert planet. Leto takes with him his beloved concubine, Lady Jessica, and their talented 15-year-old son, Paul, as well as their entourage of fighters and trainers such as Gurney Halleck (once a smuggler and a Harkonnen slave), swordmaster Duncan Idaho, and the “human computer” Thufir Hawat, (an old assassin and statesman).

In reality granting the Atreides control of Dune is merely a ploy by the Emperor (who is jealous of Duke Leto’s immense popularity)—a setup for House Atreides to be brought down by a retaliatory strike from Baron Harkonnen. The Harkonnens do attack, and Duke Leto fights bravely, sacrificing himself to allow Paul and Jessica to escape into the desert. After rigorous adventures, Paul and Jessica meet up with the nomadic desert tribe of the “Fremen.” Through his own hidden mental and physical talents, Paul becomes the leader of the Fremen and also their messiah (Muad’Dib) as he leads them in a planet-wide battle to overthrow House Harkonnen and even bring down Emperor Shaddam himself. Paul eventually takes the Imperial throne as his own. Subsequent
Dune
novels follow Paul in his later years, as well as his children and descendants.

Now, eleven years after the death of Frank Herbert, his son Brian (a critically acclaimed novelist in his own right) teams up with internationally best-selling and award-winning author Kevin J. Anderson. Together, Herbert and Anderson will return to the fabulous universe of
Dune
to launch a new epic for a new millennium, drawing on notes, outlines, and correspondence Frank Herbert left behind at his death, as well as conversations and brainstorming sessions Brian Herbert held with his father. These original and exclusive sources will form the foundation for recreating new novels set in the Dune universe, with all the complexity and realism that millions of fans worldwide have come to expect.

The Prelude to Dune Trilogy

Writing with the full cooperation of the Herbert estate, and with access to Frank Herbert’s notes and manuscripts, Brian Herbert and Kevin J. Anderson will weave an intricate and compelling new prequel saga that chronicles the legendary events that lead up to
Dune
.

Set in the time immediately preceding
Dune
,
Prelude to Dune
returns to the imaginative events, settings, and characters most beloved by readers. By going to the heart of the classic novel’s popularity, this prequel trilogy will recreate the magic and pageantry of the original
Dune
and lay the groundwork for extending the series in fresh and exciting directions for possible future novels.

As described in detail in the attached proposal, the Prelude to Dune trilogy will dramatize complex events familiar to the millions of
Dune
readers, but which are only hinted at in the actual novels: the forbidden romance of PAUL MUAD’DIB’s parents, DUKE LETO ATREIDES and the LADY JESSICA; the court politics and civil wars sparked by the power-hungry EMPEROR SHADDAM IV, ruler of the known galaxy; the manipulations of the evil HOUSE HARKONNEN and its stranglehold on the spice mining industry; and the explorations of young planetologist LIET-KYNES among the mysterious Fremen people on the desert planet of Dune.

Frank Herbert’s sequels to
Dune
spanned thousands of years and explored a wildly changing galaxy. The sixth novel,
Chapterhouse: Dune
is set five and a half millennia after the initial epic of Paul Atreides and his battles with House Harkonnen. While additional sequels to the series may extend the timeline even farther into the future, focusing on the core events and settings of the first novel is sure to spark the imaginations of all
Dune
readers, as well as providing a new starting point for an entirely fresh audience.

Several months after Brian Herbert and Kevin J. Anderson began to work together, the Herbert family located two previously unknown safety deposit boxes. Into these boxes Frank Herbert had placed an outline, extensive notes, and computer disks for an unwritten
Dune
sequel—the resolution of the entire 5000-year saga.

This astounding discovery, made more than a decade after Frank Herbert’s death, indicates exactly where he intended to go with the dramatic grand finale of the series. The outline provides a map and specific raw material that will allow Herbert and Anderson to eventually write the culmination of a grand epic that has been awaiting completion since 1985. In addition, this lost outline gives the coauthors a pattern to thread into the Prelude to Dune trilogy that will weave the entire series together and bring it to a sweeping conclusion.

***

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