Read Writing the TV Drama Series 3rd Edition: How to Succeed as a Professional Writer in TV Online
Authors: Pamela Douglas
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Douglas, Pamela
Writing the TV drama series / Pamela Douglas. -- 3rd ed.
p. cm.
Includes bibliographical references.
ISBN 978-1-61593-058-6
1. Television authorship. 2. Television series--Authorship. I. Title.
PN1992.7.D68 2011
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To Raya Yarbrough and John Spencer with love
T
ABLE
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C
ONTENTS
Executive Producer:
ER, The West Wing, Southland
WHAT’S SO SPECIAL ABOUT TV DRAMA SERIES?
Three Qualities of Episodic TV Series
Myth 3: You can’t do that on TV.
Myth 4: All TV series are the same.
Myth 5: Television is a wasteland.
• An hour show has to fit an hour.
• Series deadlines are for real.
• Drama series have an act structure.
• Each series fits a franchise.
GUEST SPEAKER: DAVID ISAACS
(
M*A*S*H, Cheers, Frasier, Mad Men)
HOW SHOWS GET ON TV AND THE TV SEASON
Chart: Traditional Two-Year Development and Production of a New Show
(4) Create a Presentation Reel
Chart: New Series Development at One Network
September to November: The Pilot Script
December and January: The Greenlight
February to April: Pilot Season
July and August: Write Like Crazy
Chart: Sample Character Arcs for a Season
September and October: The Debut
November through March: Completing the Season
GUEST SPEAKER: CHARLES COLLIER
HOW A CLASSIC SCRIPT IS CRAFTED
Excerpt from
NYPD Blue
,
“Simone Says”
Excerpt from
NYPD Blue
, “Hearts and Souls”
GUEST SPEAKER: STEVEN BOCHCO
(
Hill Street Blues, L.A. Law, NYPD Blue
)
SPOTLIGHT ON WRITING PROCEDURALS
GUEST SPEAKER: ANN DONAHUE
(
CSI: NY, CSI: Miami
)
GUEST SPEAKERS: MICHELLE & ROBERT KING
(
The Good Wife
)
GUEST SPEAKER: DAVID SIMON
(
Homicide, The Wire, Treme
)
SPOTLIGHT ON WRITING YOUR PILOT SCRIPT
GUEST SPEAKER: GEORGIA JEFFRIES
(
Cagney & Lacey, China Beach
)
IT’S WHO YOU KNOW: WORKING ON STAFF
Mistake 1: Don’t separate from the staff.
Mistake 2: Don’t mix personal and work issues.
Mistake 3: Don’t have other plans.
Mistake 4: Don’t work at home instead.
Mistake 5: Don’t be precious about your script.
Mistake 6: Don’t “dis” the culture of the staff.
Mistake 7: Don’t work on a series that’s wrong for you.
3. Story Editor / Executive Story Editor
7. Executive Producer / Showrunner
SPOTLIGHT ON “UNSCRIPTED/REALITY” SHOWS
GUEST SPEAKER: SCOTT A. STONE
(
The Mole, The Joe Schmo Show, Top Design
)
Don’t spec the series you plan to pitch.
Ask the right questions about a series.
LIFE AFTER FILM SCHOOL: CAUTIONARY TALES AND SUCCESS STORIES
Fourteen Years after Graduating
GUEST SPEAKER: DAVID GOETSCH
(
The Big Bang Theory, 3rd Rock from the Sun
)
P
REFACE TO THE
T
HIRD
E
DITION
In times of great change, the question is:
what remains?
In 2005, when the First Edition of
Writing the TV Drama Series
was published, the rules of TV were knowable and clear. Hour dramas had four acts with commercial breaks every 13 minutes or so. A network TV season was usually 22 episodes that ran from September to May. And viewers sat on living room couches to watch their TV sets, tuning in to their favorite programs at the times when the programs were scheduled for broadcast.
Back then, I wanted to tell you how to get into this field and do good work once you’re here. That much remains.
By the Second Edition in 2007, many of the rules had changed — but the rules were still clear. On broadcast TV, hour drama shows went to five or six acts; basic cable was offering scripted series that followed traditional paradigms; on premium cable, HBO and Showtime always won the critical awards, and their commercial-free model had become a distinct form of its own. Pilot opportunities for new writers had blown open, but the pilots themselves were written and made the same way they’d always been.
Back then, I wanted to tell you how to use the new rules to write well and succeed. That remains also.
For the Third Edition, I initially thought I’d update the major shows, add a few fresh interviews, and reflect more of what’s happening in alternative forms and on the Internet. But as I researched this edition, I discovered that almost everyone — from showrunners to struggling writers to industry executives to new media creators — were no longer merely adjusting the rules. Now they were asking basic questions: What is television? What is drama? What is a series? What are the delivery options? What are our obligations to the audience? Does a mass audience exist? Even what is reality?
And yet, after the smoke clears, more remains than appeared at first. No matter whom I asked about the future of television, the name of Aristotle, the ancient Greek philosopher, kept being invoked, not only by writers of great drama series, but by someone doing Webisodes and someone else making “Unscripted” shows. Though Aristotle set out the principles of drama thousands of years ago to describe archetypal tragedies in the plays of his time, those essential dramatic principles remain today.
The writer’s skill at storytelling, understanding what drives human beings, the guts to touch the passions, fears and aspirations of viewers, and honestly portray the universal issues of our lives — that content still relies on the art, craft, and insight of people who write.
So this Third Edition will present it all: the traditional basis for writing TV drama juxtaposed with new forms, traditional delivery systems seen in the light of current technology, and interviews with “Guest Speakers” whose ideas diverge from each other more than in past editions. These range from deep social reality that concerns the creator of
The Wire
, to nuts-and-bolts from a producer of so-called “Reality” shows, and from working writers coping with a shifting marketplace to programming decisions by the President of AMC cable who is part of shifting that marketplace.
In the past I paraphrased
All About Eve
, advising readers to hold on to their seat belts. But in zero gravity, the challenge is instead to go with the flow as you explore an evolving landscape. In a world afloat, it turns out that the TV drama series is something that does remain.
I
NTRODUCTION
More than a thousand students have come through my classes in the two decades I’ve taught at the USC School of Cinematic Arts. At the same time, my professional career was growing to include story editor and producer credits on television dramas, the Humanitas Prize, and awards and nominations including Emmys, Writers Guild, and American Women in Radio and Television, and a position on the Board of Directors of the Writers Guild. Always, my screenwriting and teaching have complemented each other.
I bring my working life into the classroom: What is it like to be actively breaking stories, writing, rewriting, giving and getting notes, seeing how your scripts translate to screen? I clearly recall freelancing television episodes, but I also know how the other side of the desk reacts to pitches, because I’ve been in both chairs. I’ve written for both broadcast and cable, and for virtually every dramatic genre. In my class, students learn from someone who has been there.
Imagine you’ve stopped by a typical episodic drama class in the middle of a term. Ten students sit at a table, scripts and DVDs from our in-class library —
House, The Good Wife, Mad Men, Breaking Bad, Dexter, The Wire
— among others in the middle. The class has not begun, but people are returning scripts and discs, reaching for one they want next.