War of the Wizards (29 page)

(
95
) Replaced ‘rock or’ with ‘rock, or’.

(
97
) Replaced ‘semi-circle’ with ‘semicircle’. Replaced ‘beasts, others’ with ‘beasts; others’. Replaced ‘fire, with’ with ‘fire with’.

(
98
) Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.

(
99
) Replaced ‘fast flowing’ with ‘fast-flowing’. Replaced ‘north east’ with ‘northeast’.

(
103
) Replaced ‘while, then’ with ‘while, and then’.

(
104
) Replaced ‘crowd of demons are’ with ‘crowd of demons is’. Replaced ‘The demon pack forms a large circle around you and stand’ with ‘The demon pack forms a large circle around you and they stand’.

(
107
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
108
) Replaced ‘enchantment’ with ‘Enchantment’.

(
111
) Replaced ‘forward, then’ with ‘forward, and then’.

(
113
) Replaced ‘magical Power’ with ‘Magical Power’. Replaced ‘long range’ with ‘long-range’.

(
115
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘powers’ with ‘Powers’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘or wish’ with ‘or if you wish’.

(
121
) Replaced ‘obscenely, others’ with ‘obscenely; others’.

(
123
) Replaced ‘first round’ with ‘second round’.

(
124
) Replaced ‘Elemental plane’ with ‘Elemental Plane’. Replaced ‘large, clay’ with ‘large clay’.

(
125
) Replaced ‘life forces’ with ‘life-forces’.

(
128
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘ onto’.

(
129
) Replaced ‘life force’ with ‘life-force’. Replaced ‘arch enemy’ with ‘arch-enemy’. Replaced ‘Come … we’ with ‘Come … We’.

(
132
) Replaced ‘the head of’ with ‘the heads of’.

(
134
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
135
) Replaced ‘balustraded gallerys’ with ‘balustraded galleries’.

(
137
) Replaced ‘group of demons are’ with ‘group of demons is’. Moved the illustration that was located in this Section to
Section 139
, as the event it depicts is described there. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
139
) Replaced ‘The horde stop’ with ‘The horde stops’. Moved the illustration that was located in
Section 137
here, as the event it depicts is described here. Replaced the illustration caption ‘You hurl a cascading rain of magical fire on to the head of the demonic horde below.’ with ‘Your heart misses a beat as a huge pair of monstrous eyes appear within the flames of the portal.’ Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘pair of monstrous eyes appears’ with ‘pair of monstrous eyes appear’ in both the section and the illustration's caption.

(
141
) Replaced ‘large, reptilian’ with ‘large reptilian’.

(
142
) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘them or’ with ‘them, or’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’. Replaced ‘Visionary, and’ with ‘Visionary and’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’.

(
147
) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Replaced ‘small, black’ with ‘small black’.

(
153
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘large pair of eyes appears’ with ‘large pair of eyes appear’. Replaced ‘sweeps up the side of the shallow valley in their hundreds and attacks’ with ‘sweep up the side of the shallow valley in their hundreds and attack’.

(
154
) Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’. Replaced ‘death blow’ with ‘death-blow’.

(
158
) Replaced ‘points, and wish’ with ‘points and wish’.

(
159
) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Sorcery, and’ with ‘Sorcery and’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(
161
) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.

(
162
) Replaced ‘power of Prophecy’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’.

(
165
) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Astral plane’ with ‘Astral Plane’.

(
167
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Demon lord’ with ‘Demonlord’. Replaced ‘Agarash, and’ with ‘Agarash and’. Replaced ‘Moonstone, and’ with ‘Moonstone and’.

(
170
) Replaced ‘the demon horde are’ with ‘the demon horde is’. Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Replaced ‘out-rider’ with ‘outrider’. Replaced ‘power of Sorcery’ with ‘Power of Sorcery’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Gem, and’ with ‘Gem and’. Replaced ‘Telergy, and’ with ‘Telergy and’. Replaced ‘Enchantment, and’ with ‘Enchantment and’.

(
172
) Replaced ‘retatively’ with ‘relatively’. Replaced ‘she cries ‘Something’ with ‘she cries. ‘Something’. Replaced ‘moving at speed’ with ‘moving at great speed’.

(
175
) Replaced ‘lack. (ie 2’ with ‘lack (i.e. 2’.

(
176
) Replaced ‘Demon lord’ with ‘Demonlord’.

(
177
) Replaced ‘hop and’ with ‘hop, and’. Replaced ‘Necromancy, and’ with ‘Necromancy and’.

(
178
) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.

(
180
) Replaced ‘death blow’ with ‘death-blow’. Replaced ‘points and’ with ‘points, and’. Replaced ‘If you possess 3
WILLPOWER
points, and wish to fill the Moonstone with your power and hurl it against the wall’ with ‘If you possess 3
WILLPOWER
points, and wish to fill the Moonstone with your power and hurl its power against the wall’ as the original wording made it sound as though the option was to throw
the Moonstone
rather than its power.

(
181
) Replaced ‘power of Physiurgy’ with ‘Power of Physiurgy’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.

(
182
) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.

(
184
) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.

(
187
) Replaced ‘blows and’ with ‘blows, and’.

(
190
) Replaced ‘pain, then’ with ‘pain, and then’.

(
191
) Replaced ‘for, indeed, I hate you’ with ‘for indeed I hate you’. Replaced ‘breathes, ‘I’ with ‘breathes. ‘I’. Replaced ‘represent; the’ with ‘represent: the’. Replaced ‘eyes; colourless’ with ‘eyes, colourless’. Replaced ‘feeling; like’ with ‘feeling, like’. Replaced ‘powerful, I am’ with ‘powerful; I am’.

(
192
) Replaced ‘failed, your’ with ‘failed; your’.

(
193
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
194
) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Sorcery, and’ with ‘Sorcery and’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(
195
) Replaced ‘By the Gods’ with ‘By the gods’.

(
196
) Replaced ‘power of Sorcery’ with ‘Power of Sorcery’. Replaced ‘forcefield’ with ‘force field’.

(
198
) Replaced ‘eyeblink’ with ‘eye-blink’.

(
199
) Replaced ‘past, then’ with ‘past, and then’.

(
200
) Replaced ‘column reach’ with ‘column reaches’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Necromancy, and’ with ‘Necromancy and’.

(
201
) Replaced ‘you ashore. I am’ with ‘you ashore. ‘I am’. Replaced ‘host of Masbaté warriors wait’ with ‘host of Masbaté warriors waits’. Replaced ‘fleet-footed wariors’ with ‘fleet-footed warriors’. Replaced ‘shore’, he’ with ‘shore,’ he’.

(
202
) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’.

(
203
) Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’.

(
204
) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘protection, and’ with ‘protection and’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.

(
207
) Replaced ‘blood and’ with ‘blood, and’.

(
208
) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Magical Power of Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Higher Magick of Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Physiurgy, and’ with ‘Physiurgy and’. Replaced ‘or wish’ with ‘or if you wish’.

(
212
) Replaced ‘If you wish to fire a long-range attack with your Wizard's Staff at the leading demon in the formation, and you have 2
WILLPOWER
points’ with ‘If you have 2
WILLPOWER
points and wish to fire a long-range attack with your Wizard's Staff at the leading demon in the formation’.

(
213
) Replaced ‘look-out’ with ‘lookout’. Replaced ‘north east’ with ‘northeast’.

(
214
) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.

(
215
) Replaced ‘range, with’ with ‘range with’.

(
216
) Replaced ‘pupiless’ with ‘pupilless’.

(
217
) Replaced ‘power of Telergy’ with ‘Power of Telergy’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.

(
218
) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.

(
220
) Replaced ‘enery’ with ‘energy’.

(
221
) Replaced ‘plunge into’ with ‘plunges into’.

(
224
) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.

(
225
) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(
227
) Replaced ‘Necromancy, and’ with ‘Necromancy and’.

(
229
) Replaced ‘Half-way’ with ‘Halfway’.

(
230
) Replaced ‘Pin-points’ with ‘Pinpoints’.

(
233
) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.

(
234
) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘or are’ with ‘or if you are’.

(
236
) Replaced ‘bloodcurdling’ with ‘blood-curdling’.

(
237
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘power of Necromancy’ with ‘Power of Necromancy’. Replaced ‘power as a Visionary’ with ‘Power as a Visionary’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’. Replaced ‘Visionary, and’ with ‘Visionary and’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’.

(
241
) Replaced ‘a formulae’ with ‘a formula’.

(
242
) Replaced ‘gasp, Beyond’ with ‘gasp. Beyond’.

(
246
) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.

(
248
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
254
) Replaced ‘Kazim; the’ with ‘Kazim, the’.

(
255
) Replaced ‘sorcery’ with ‘Sorcery’.

(
258
) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.

(
260
) Replaced ‘Daziarn plain’ with ‘Daziarn Plane’.

(
261
) Replaced ‘If you wish to release a long-range attack at the Flying Snake, and have 2
WILLPOWER
points’ with ‘If you have 2
WILLPOWER
points and wish to release a long-range attack at the Flying Snake’.

(
265
) Replaced ‘turn to 206’ with ‘do not continue the combat but turn immediately to 206’.

(
268
) Replaced ‘miles lies’ with ‘miles lie’. Replaced ‘Tilos hills’ with ‘Tilos Hills’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘The howling pack springs forward’ with ‘The howling pack spring forward’.

(
270
) Replaced ‘turn to 276’ with ‘do not continue the combat but turn immediately to 276’. Replaced ‘rounds, and’ with ‘rounds and’.

(
271
) Replaced ‘crawling writhing mass’ with ‘crawling, writhing mass’.

(
274
) Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(
277
) Replaced ‘If you wish to release a long-range attack at the Flying Snake, and have 2
WILLPOWER
points’ with ‘If you have 2
WILLPOWER
points and wish to release a long-range attack at the Flying Snake’.

(
279
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Invulnerability, and’ with ‘Invulnerability and’.

(
280
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘the above powers’ with ‘the above Powers’. Changed the last choice to lead to
Section 175
instead of
Section 59
, as
Section 59
does not fit into the context of the story here, and there are no other ways to reach
Section 175
. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Physiurgy, and’ with ‘Physiurgy and’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’.

(
282
) Replaced ‘crosed’ with ‘crossed’. Replaced ‘reinforcments’ with ‘reinforcements’. Replaced ‘haggard and’ with ‘haggard face and’.

(
284
) Replaced ‘demons and’ with ‘demons, and’.

(
287
) Replaced ‘realise’ with ‘realize’. Replaced ‘forward, then’ with ‘forward, and then’.

(
289
) Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’. Replaced ‘sharp and’ with ‘sharp, and’. Replaced ‘elemental plane’ with ‘Elemental Plane’.

(
291
) Replaced ‘shield of sorcery’ with ‘
Shield of Sorcery
’.

(
293
) Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’. Replaced ‘the horde begin’ with ‘the horde begins’.

(
294
) Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘empty vial’ with ‘empty Vial’.

(
295
) Replaced ‘again, otherwise’ with ‘again; otherwise’. Replaced ‘energy, then’ with ‘energy, and then’. Replaced ‘crack’ with ‘
crack
’.